"Revisions"

As I look at my old papers I notice that all my papers have improved significantly. I had to make many revisions in the comma area and my paragraph organization. In two of my papers I also had problems with sentence structure. I used the St.Martha's Handbook while making many of my revisions. While revising my papers I compared the first draft to the last one. It helped me to compare my mistakes for the final draft. I carefully reviewed each sentence to see if any corrections needed to be made. While revising the research project I took many sentences out so the paragraphs could have more clarity. My narrative draft was the easiest to revise. I had the most trouble with the research project.