Essay Errors

In my first drafts, I had a lot of problems with commas, sentence structure, and paragraph organization. For my comma problem, I referred to St. Martha's Handbook page 710. I practiced on the exercises in the chapter before revising my papers to make sure I fully understand the chapter. Chapter One on The Art and Craft of Writing, helped me with my paragraph organization. The chapter explained how to develop a paragraph and organize your sentences properly. Organizing my sentences became a big problem for me also. St.Martha's Handbook, page 101, helped me with that problem. I found it very hard to get all my ideas into one paragraph, so I started to mix my ideas. When writing my final drafts, I referred to the St.Martha's Handbook while I rewrote some of my paragraphs and sentences.